They say the way you butchered Tuesday was
The same as sour milk - in the doorway, the
Way it framed you inch for inch,
You held knives like butterflies, let them go
Where they flew, effortlessly
To land with a
thud
Into the kitchen wall
I could have wrapped my hands around your
Skinny ankles, your hands will never reach
Octaves now that you've become
Frozen
You were dark in the cheeks but
Pale in the legs, and they whisper about how you ran,
So fast,
And the sun could never catch you to
Sugar your skin brown
And then you
.shattered.
Your porcelain legs
Were left for me to collect
In the dirt of
The paddock
And this isn't a noir, darling, this is something
A bit more hazy than that
That afternoon, that very silt-sifted afternoon, your hair
Caught fire from July dustflowers that blossomed
In the sky like
Blood on the
Carpet













Comments
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lesbionic tendencies
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Automatons gather all the pieces so the world may be increased
In simulation jubilation for the builders of the body of the beast
In the sky like
Blood on the
Carpet
----yum...
I missed your writing really really badly! this one, gave me my fix for now. Hope feel like writing somemore
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Long days and pleasant nights
~jef
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Pretend I said something clever and profound
you flatterer
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Automatons gather all the pieces so the world may be increased
In simulation jubilation for the builders of the body of the beast
i like the small action in each stanza. the knives, the grab for the ankles, the shattering, the blossoming. there´re these small details that jump out, like the image of the doorway or the paddock. and the flowers, of course the flowers.
i like the third stanza especially. it stands out from the other three, adds a little kick that makes the piece complete.
que bonita.
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Automatons gather all the pieces so the world may be increased
In simulation jubilation for the builders of the body of the beast
it is remembering, rather than creating. i'm glad you noticed. but of course, you would be the one to do so, wouldn't you? <3
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Automatons gather all the pieces so the world may be increased
In simulation jubilation for the builders of the body of the beast
Aw, hell, I love this entire thing.
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Why Not?
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